The Hemingway Suite

December 6, 2016
krauserpua

I’m hibernating in Bali, Indonesia for the next month or so in an attempt to slow my brain down and get away from the terribly distracting impact of hot women [1]. A key goal while here is to complete my next book, volume two of the memoir. It was already good to go last month but I decided I’d like to do another rewrite to get it into the best possible state. So now I’m incorporating feedback from two editors and my test readers. Here’s a section from chapter sixteen:

Shitsville for women

Shitsville for women

We were nothing if not grandiose. If Rock Solid Game had a larger budget we’d have carved our faces into Mount Rushmore or bought ourselves an island and declared independence. We’d then take great joy in attending United Nations assemblies and trolling the shit out of them.

“Could the ambassador for Trollistan please leave the chamber,” would become a common refrain in such a future.

We were determined to build ourselves up both in reality and within our own imaginations. This was something Jimmy had become world-class at. When you met him he had a rock-star vibe and would regal you with some tales that seemed eminently plausible to hear but preposterous should you ever write a bullet-point list of the information they conveyed. He had some established favourites but was quite capable of spinning such yarns on the fly.

“I’ve only been to Malta once. It’s the last of the Mediterranean islands I needed to tick off the list,” Jimmy would drop in to a conversation with a girl. “I’ve heard it’s great for scuba diving – crystal clear water and underwater wrecks from World War Two – but unfortunately I never really got a chance to try it. I’d taken my band there as a celebration for finishing our demo, so we could all hang out, try the local foods, and try scuba.”

“You can scuba?” asks the girl.

“No, that’s why I took us there. To learn. It must be fantastic to glide through the water, totally weightless, hearing shoals of colourful fish swim by while you’re investigating sunken warships. I’m sure that’s how freedom feels.”

The girl grips her drink, and her eyes go wide at the imagery.

“But my nephew had a motorbike accident on his holiday in Cyprus the same evening I arrived in Malta. His friends had rung me up, frantic. Jimmy! Jimmy! Dave is in hospital with a broken leg, and the police are sniffing around because he had no motorbike insurance.”

“Oh my god!” the girl gasps.

“I know. We were all sitting in a Maltese restaurant built into the fort walls of Valletta harbour, drinking wine and looking out over the water. A bunch of local girls we’d just met were going to take us nightclubbing, and then my phone is ringing.”

“What did you do?” asks the girl, leaning forwards, hanging on his every word.

“I had no choice – he’s my nephew. So I booked a flight that night and rushed over to Cyprus. Once the doctors assured me his cast was solid and he could be moved, I took him back to Manchester. I must admit, once we got back, he was safe, and his mum stopped crying, I lost my temper a bit and bawled him out for being so careless and putting us all through so much worry.”

Just stop and think of the impression that kind of story makes on you. It’s basically a story about a group of mates who went on a cheap holiday to Malta, got drunk, and had to abort on the first night. A cluster-fuck and yet somehow Jimmy emerges looking like an international traveller, rock star, and adventure sport enthusiast who is king of his gang yet loves and protects his family.

That’s the power of DHVs, and I learned it from him. When we first met, he was a low-level project manager living in a squalid flat by Elephant & Castle. That’s all. And yet sitting, listening to him in a bar you’d think George Clooney felt lucky at the chance to buy him a drink.

Château Hampstead was itself an exercise in grandiosity, taking a battered Jewish care home and rebranding it as a hotbed of rebellious adventure. No stone was left unturned, and when we finally got done redecorating the ground floor common rooms our attention turned to a small office room on the top floor.

“We could create our own member’s lodge, like Milk & Honey,” I suggested to Mick as we lay in hammocks in the garden on a warm spring day earlier in the year. We convened a house meeting and made the proposal.

We asked the house to chip in money and labour towards the project, but they all declined. So Jimmy, Mick, and I pooled £500 and set to work. Or rather, Mick and I set to work. Jimmy bumbled around making a great show of interest but did almost nothing until we’d already finished repainting the entire room.

The walls were split horizontally at hip-height by a runner, so we painted the upper section and the ceiling dark brown and the lower walls dark green. Heavy velvet blackout curtains covered the windows and both inner door and fire exit to give a permanent late-evening mood. I found two deep green leather Chesterfield sofas on Gumtree and had them delivered. The room was finished off with 1940s style furniture – a low table with a world map underneath the glass surface, a chest of drawers with an art deco lamp perched on top, and then Jimmy finally made himself useful discovering a portable drinks cabinet disguised as a globe. We filled that with bottles of rum, vodka, and whiskey. Discreet lighting tucked behind the sofas completed the classy, speak-easy vibe.

The next day Mick came knocking on my bedroom door.

“Nick, put your shoes on! Someone has left a cabinet on the road outside. It’s perfect for the room.”

So Mick and I ran across Finchley Road, each took one end of the abandoned cabinet, and hefted it two hundred metres and up the fire escape stairs into the room. We’d claimed it literally one minute before another pair of locals who’d also meant to nab the free furniture and instead stood on the pavement bemused, scratching their heads.

Despite us feeling like a pair of gypsies, Mick had found a gem. The hip-height thick oak cabinet was fronted by two glass doors and perfectly suited the room.

We’d created a time capsule of the 1940s, our very own Red Room from Milk & Honey.

“What are we going to call it?” we mused, the three of us standing in the middle of the room absolutely amazed at how much better than expected it had turned out to be. Various names were mooted, each trying to capture something of our philosophical or aesthetic spirit.

“The Roark Room,” suggested Jimmy, who’d just finished reading The Fountainhead and was very much enamoured with Ayn Rand.

“The Atlas Library,” I thought, blending the twin influences of Atlas Shrugged and the Bioshock video game we all played.

“But there’s no books,” said Mick. We fixed that by putting up a small bookshelf in the corner and filling it with the Penguin Classics series of Tolstoy, Dumas, and Dickens that none of us read.

Finally one of us – I forget which – uttered “The Hemingway Suite,” and we immediately seized on it. It captured the time period, the manliness of Hemingway’s writing, and the upgrading of our mere “room” to the grander “suite”. I had a brass nameplate engraved and superglued to the outside of the door to the corridor.

“We’ll need some rules. Member’s Clubs always have rules.”

We quickly settled on a list that made us laugh and also feel so very important and sophisticated.

  • Non members are only allowed in when invited by a member.
  • No music recorded later than 1959.
  • No television or YouTube.
  • Women may be invited in, but they must never express an opinion on any topic whatsoever.
  • No member may raise his voice or use profanities.

The rule that created the most fun was this: All insults must be delivered from a seated position. It was intended to minimise the chance of fisticuffs and ensure gentlemanly discourse. What actually happened is we’d wait until someone stood up to mix some drinks at the bar, then we’d brutalise him with insults. To respond, they’d have to run back over to a seat, sit down, hit back, then return to the drinks.

We had a grand old time. We’d suit up and hang out there every evening for weeks on end, drinking whisky and smoking Cuban cigars while listening to jazz greats like Django Reinhardt in the dank atmospheric surroundings. We’d tell stories or debate issues, the end result of which always seemed to demonstrate that we were cooler than everyone else in the world. We each felt like the Most Interesting Man In The World from the Dos Equis beer commercials.

We also consumed great quantities of liquor.

It was during our Hemingway Suite reveries that we’d develop various theories about women, lifestyle, and how to achieve the financial and geographical freedom we aspired to. We felt completely unplugged. We weren’t even in the same decade as all the traffic whizzing by outside on Finchley Road.

We were James Bond. All three of us.

Predictably, the Suite was a tremendous aid in seducing girls. We’d be sitting in the bright, airy, tumultuous environment of the common rooms downstairs and then whisper confidentially, “Let’s go up to the Hemingway Suite.”

“What’s that?” the girl would ask.

“It’s our own special members room. Like a whiskey and jazz room. Come on, let’s walk up.”

The girl would be led through the maze of corridors up to a thick wooden door with the brass nameplate on it. The door opens, and she’s led into a time-warp. We’d already arranged a deal in advance where the player could text one of the other members to set the room up in advance once he was about to pull the trigger. More than once, Mick would have a girl in the lounge and message me so I’d run upstairs, turn on the lamps, set the music playing, then squeeze out the fire exit a moment before Mick rolled in with his girl.

Once inside, it was game over. They’d fall in with the rules, accept a drink, and ease into the languid atmosphere. It was the Lust Bubble expressed in architecture, an escape from reality for just two people.

It was also a thirty second’s walk from our bedrooms.

The finished suite

The finished suite

If this section of masterful writing caught your attention, you’ll probably want to buy Volume One of the memoir to bring yourself up to date. Just a tenner for the PDF or £20 for a reassuringly heavy paperback

 

[1] Bali is absolute shit for women. I’m more likely to see a hot girl in Newcastle. I’ll keep my eyes open but my current opinion is that no-one is banging hotties in Bali no matter how many rep points they have on RooshV forum. I haven’t even seen a girl above a high six here.

16 Comments

  1. You will find lots of drunk, 18 year old, Aussie, “schoolies” in Kuta this time of year. You could be what they call a “toolie” and what the media warns the precious next generation about. http://www.news.com.au/travel/australian-holidays/queensland/tips-on-how-to-survive-schoolies-and-avoid-toolies/news-story/9df798fad93dac93d43093738d9e946a [Heh, heh. Top class white knighting in that article. Really, I just haven’t seen any hot girls. There’s tons of Aussies but all are pretty rough-looking. Perhaps this is the calm before the storm. K.]

  2. This is brilliant Krauser. Leave it to you Englishmen to make us Americans feel lacking in the class/dgaf department. This is great stuff, def want to read more of it.

  3. Strange moment in Bali, rainy season. Try canggu for girls in the coffee shops and hipster bars. Legit model types do vacation here. Take a surf lesson if you’re a skeptic, you’ll run into a few in the water. Are you familiar with Xsplat? See if you can meet him, will blow your mind. [I believe what I see with my own eyes, which right now is nothing. But it’s early days, so still looking and hoping. K.]

  4. where in Bali u stay – Kuta? some Balinese chix are hot. didnt u make fun of this fat guy who writes on RoK (forgot his name) for writing silly ebooks on Philippines, saying he cant get white chix – and now u are in SE Asia urself?

  5. The example of how Jimmy “emerges looking like an international traveller, rock star, and adventure sport enthusiast…” is really interesting. This is something I’m trying to work on myself, as I’m not great at telling stories. Are there any particularly good resources/articles you would recommend that go into detail about how one can do improve this skillset? I think you very briefly mention go into story telling in Daygame mastery, but not in much detail.

  6. Just got back from Bali and totally agree on the woman situation. The Gili islands aren’t any better.

    When I was there me and my mate played count the women with trashy tattoos and I was overwhelmed. Get back to Eastern Europe Krauser!

    Try the Blue Karma hotel in Seminyak if you get a chance. It’s heavenly!

  7. Good stuff nick, I have already finished reading balls deep and still going through adventure sex, any updates regarding harmony model?? [I’m probably not gonna finish it. Two other books ahead of it in the queue. K.]

    • Yeah I’m really interested in the harmony model. Soul capture too (i’ll use it responsibly).

      Also, can you tell us what happened to Skeletor? I heard he died of MS. Is this true? Since I read your book i’ve been trying to find out more about him.

  8. If you have gamed girls in Eastern Europe then SEA girls are nothing. A small trip to Penang Island won’t be that bad nevertheless.

  9. I know you and roosh aren’t exactly pals but do you have an opinion on his recent anti self improvement videos? It just seems in line with your last tweets about the pointlessness of chase skirt

    • I personally don’t agree with what Roosh is saying. Daygame, like any other endeavour is a skill that can be improved.

      It’s all a mindset. It’s not about you not being good enough as a person. But rather not being good at daygame. They’re 2 completely different things. That’s the biggest mistake I see with most guys who get into it. They go into it with the wrong frame of mind by mistaking daygame as their overall identity when it isn’t. So when it goes bad, it attacks their self-esteem and self-worth,

      It’s like a girl can be more attractive depending on how good she is at applying makeup and dressing up. It doesn’t make her less worthy as a person. It’s simply her ability to improve her attractiveness. Human’s are superficial and judge others on the exterior.

      So to say you don’t need to improve yourself because “you’re good enough” is a cop out.

      As long as you separate your self-worth with what you’re doing: Learning a new skill set. Then the journey towards getting better will be a lot easier.

  10. _That’s_ a room.

    £500 to do the lot, or just phase 1?

  11. Agree, Bali is not a place where you would go pick up girls. You go to wait out worst of European winter, surf, bike, hike and if you get laid, that’s a bonus.

    I spent couple winter in Bali and agree that Canggu has some talent because it’s the surf hub of Bali and it attracts fit hot girls (not to mention it’s much more relaxing than Kuta oir Seminyak). You will see them on the beach, I’ve had a boner on my surf-board quite a few times looking at their sexy wet asses in micro-bikinis. It’s quite international and multi-cultural place (wester and eastern europeans, including russians, australians, asians, occasional americans/canadians). People are very relaxed and friendly there. Having said that (a) it’s not a walking place – you need to rent a scooter (b) quite a few hotties are with boyfriends or are into (expert-level) surfer guys (c) high season is july-august (because surf is better than and it’s winter in australia) (d) too much of the hipster vibe.

    I’ve approached girls during the day and night (basically there is a different party at different venue each day and everyone goes there) but all my lays came from surf-camp game where I chatted up girls staying in the same surfcamp (Chill House is decent for that as many girls stop on their way to Ubud and yoga classes attracts them too but there’s probably other ones). Im talking 6 and 7 here on hotness scale.

    The good news is that Singapore is only 2.5 hours away and it’s great for daygame (both for Asian and non-asian cause there is many european expats). Good malls, lots of traffic, fluent english. [Thanks for the input. I’ve found Thailand seems rather easy. Two notches in three days, total spend: 65 baht. K.]

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